Ah!
I like the sound you make
When I touch you here
Touch you there.
Ah!
You continue to plead,
"Stop, no more... I can't..."
But I won't, not this time, uh uh.
Ah!
It's what keeps me going
Awakened a monster you have
One that'll never stop.
Ah!
Music to my ears
I plow you hard
I throw you around.
Ah!
You'll meet your end soon
This insatiable beast has gotten a taste
And will eat you up... eat you whole!
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Ah!
Real Monsters.
Fin.
No... no no no...
You're ruining it... that's not the sound you're supposed to think of when you read that... it's "ah"... not "ahhhhhhhhhhhh!"
Think moaning, sexual tension... you release a groan "ah"... not screaming "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Real Monsters" "ah".
It changes the poem completely fool!
Like the 'ah' in this?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYVmq_hR_As
YES! Exactly like that last "ah!"
... unfortunately... now I think people will only think of that jingle and not my poem... ::sigh::...
... but, thanks for trying to make it better... heh heh...
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